Dont Smoke Sig

http://i31.tinypic.com/2czsyh2.jpg

Omg robbie williams really looks sick there( i did it)

anw c&c appreciated

Whaaat is goin on there... NS though

that's.......intense....

I say there is too much going on in it, so alot to distract.

Am...
I like the left side of sig. good job there, just maybe those red lines are too visible here, I would reduce the opaicty. I dont like the right side...... too mch going on there... And his teeths are too dark.. and the whole render is too dark imo..

I dont think the render is to dark my problem is that there is way to much going on there your eyes gets distracted. I cant find a place to focus with all those colors and then suddenly a head pops out. Try to do another more sof sick kinda bg.