Hunter

Well this was my attempt at Daemon's "Time Shift" signature (followed his tutorial, obviously). But it err, kinda went wrong. Thought i'd post it, just for advice.

http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y23...wmanmessup.png

can't see the render..that's a main problem..i'll leave it to the pros for the rest:P
nice attempt tho

Yea.It's quite difficult to see render clearly.maybe oversharpened :? and those two orange lines on he's face.Do they have to be there?

Unfortunatly, the orange lines on his face is part of the render; I thought the same when I saw it. I agree with what you've said about it, so I can see that what I'm identifying as wrong, everyone else is too xD

you have some effects over the render which makes it "hidden" and therefore your sig lacks a real focal point.
too sparkly also.
and text needs to be moved somewhere else
but nice job anyway:)

text is ok for so long.
Too "glowy" and sparkly, as SS said.
No depth.