This is an excerpt from a freehand form writing. It's where I just write random words, then it just starts to flow. =P
So bored......so bored......so bored.......so bored........Im so bored......so bored........im bored.......Oh oh so bored filling this page with nonsense wondering when she will message. never giving me the light of day I only want your heart to pay. Why? Why must I feel this way? never talking to me why wont you just send me a message what did i do to not to talk to you. What did i do to recieve no reply from a simple........How are YOU?!
Why aren't you talking, sitting so cold and temperless. no feeling insdie with cold dampared lips, open your soul.
No ryhme or reason to your actions.
No sensability or breathig for my words.
Why wont you answer, I only wish to hear and see you. You wonderous lips and voice only, wish to be only be in that wonderful presence of who I want to be with.
No reason to feel this way if you don't want to take a message,
I have to find a new a way, a new path to follow, find someone
else to care, someone else to fend for. There's no rhyme or reason for these words all i want...................is a message.
03-21-2008, 02:55 PM
Papa
I like it. It could maybe do with so many I'm bored's. But besides that it's pretty swate.
03-23-2008, 09:45 AM
Samuel
Well that how It starts. I just write the same thing over, then something just comes.
04-01-2008, 09:13 AM
snap
true. this is what we used to do in english class, to brainstorm. you'd just read a text and write whatever was on your mind. it's incredibly effective, tbh, it really helps organise your thoughts.
also, giggidy, sam has a lady :O
04-02-2008, 10:42 AM
Samuel
Yeah, its good stuff. And....no I don't have a lady.