Constructive Criticism wanted

Hi well I'm pretty new to the Gfx community and I would like some constructive criticism on this sig, thanks.

http://i152.photobucket.com/albums/s.../gowcopy-1.jpg

The text is to big and doesnt fit in try blending it with the bg a little more, the render isnt really blended in with the bg it looks like he is the bg try not and make the render the actual bg and just blend him with the bg and the bg in the sig doesnt really flow to me its almost like its a bunch of blobs and swirls but if you worked on it a little more it you be pretty cool. Keep up the work, and you will keep getting better and there are some very good tuts here.

Yeah I didn't really like it just was wondering what you guys thought to see if I should keep it around ;)

I agree with Fur on somepoints. But i also disagree here and there.
I think the text isint to big, but i do think it i should blend in a little more with that what your making. U also should erase a little more here and there so it looks more natural. The render itself has the same problem as the text, it dosint blend in. Tutorials "will" solve that problem. The colors are great, ur clearly good at picking a color that fits with the image. But try to give the bg a little more like soft(ish) feel to it. Because the bg stands out more than the render.
But imo, your getting on the right path to become a good signature maker. :D