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So I was inspired by +mw.kira somewhat by some of his stuff, which if I may say so is sweet, and I came up with Creating Simplicity. I'm pretty happy with both versions, although I feel they're lacking something minor. So check 'em out and let me know what ya's all think.
http://i302.photobucket.com/albums/n...mplicity_2.png
http://i302.photobucket.com/albums/n...mplicity_1.png
Very hard to say... :/ Them both look awesome..
Maybe the first is more awesome than the second :P
Great job anyways ^^
I would...Hmm well i'll just do a critique.
The text is the first thing that bothered me. It's everywhere! I would try to condense it a bit into one place, because when it's everywhere like it is my eye just flashes from one group of text to the other; rather than the render.
Also don't use blending options! So no shadowing, or outerglow. It's quite distracting and doesn't blend a lot.
----well it seems i won't be able to finish my critique as i have to go to dinner, however i;; be back to finish it later so...
To be Continued.
Okay now to finish:
I would try and easy up on the brushing though it's nice I've never been a fan of vector brushes.
I would either get rid of them or replace them with splatter brushes and make them clipping masks.
Blending. It needs a lot of it! Honestly i don't really think i see much of a connection between BG and render. I think you should try a couple clipping masks, as i think that will blend best with this type of sig.
Compositionally wise i think you should make the render a bit smaller and move it off of the side and more towards the center. This will give us some breathing room in the sig, and IMO will make it seem less cramped.
Finally I don't really like the border. IMO you should lose the dark designs border all together and just do a flat black all he way around the sig. I favor it over cinema borders but thats just me.
Hope you find this kinda helpful, you seem to have some good depth going and the colors are good, but a few changes could make the sig a lot better IMO.
