Ratchet and Clank

Constructive Criticism please:D

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Originally Posted by Cyong

Constructive Criticism please:D

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Not your best by far. Render isn't well blended and is very dark, not lighting, no depth. The text is way too big and the blue line is distracting. The rendered clouds background is flat too.

Sorry for being so negative but you could do so much better :)

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Originally Posted by ratchetnclank

Not your best by far. Render isn't well blended and is very dark, not lighting, no depth. The text is way too big and the blue line is distracting. The rendered clouds background is flat too.

Sorry for being so negative but you could do so much better :)

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i must agree here, try to do some more to the bg cuz it seem kinda flat and boring

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Originally Posted by Daemon

i must agree here, try to do some more to the bg cuz it seem kinda flat and boring

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Originally Posted by ratchetnclank

Not your best by far. Render isn't well blended and is very dark, not lighting, no depth. The text is way too big and the blue line is distracting. The rendered clouds background is flat too.

Sorry for being so negative but you could do so much better :)

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Anyways you guys can think of to help him fix the sig? rather than saying what is bad how about some ways to improve it?

I would say try and de-blur the render and then get rid of the current BG. Use different parts of the render to make of the BG. Then simply blur teh BG and not the render. from tehre you can add c4d's clipping masks etc.

I think you just gotta lay out the BG well, and once you have that done it's smoooooth sailin.

Well, it's a bit empty for me and it is also too blured.
And the render needs some blending aswell:P
Can't really add more than Papa did.
Not your best:/