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i like but there's something about the text that doesnt realy fit there and i think u should work more on your focal
nice job..love your work man
if some of the bg, were maybe a tinch blurry, and you worked on the text a tinch, it would be worth currenting it.
actually the BG does have a blur on it, but maybe it needs 1 more?
So I guess I'm reading it needs a bit more depth.
well it has depth, its just the focal is not as easy to distinguish.
Eh.. Even if it needs a little more done to it, I think you've done a great job with this! ;)
Personally i think it's great and well worth currenting.
Thanks guys :)