http://i30.tinypic.com/ei1agy.png (v1)
http://i29.tinypic.com/2gv6cgg.png (v2)
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The lighting is better on this yet there is no defined source of light. The c4d's need blending via smudge or masks. The text needs work too. Try and sort out the background and the lighting and it will look 10 times better.
render seems stretched out to me?
lol three different sigs with same render in a row:P
I like the second one better, but I don't like the outer glow on the text.