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looks ok... not my style i guess IMO it i think its too bright don't really understand what the render is text takes away from focal its kinda chaotic from left to the centern and then really empty theres little to no BG, think u could do better why not try it a slightly bigger size as you normally do and try adding a bit more color smudge the render a bit more to blend it and if u want to keep the text that zise set it to overlay or something
its a little blurry and nice clipping mask on the side:D
There is nothing to which to bring my focus anywhere.. Which also makes me not really know what I'm looking at.. :p Need to have a focal point somewhere.. Look at your current fav sig.. That has a great focal point. You can see clearly what it is, and your eyes are brought to just the right place.. Even though you have a different style, there still needs to have the basics kept in it.. ;)
There.. That's my two cents.. :p ;)
