New sig

Here's my latest work, I'n not overly happy with it tbh. Especially not the text. Well here it is anyway:

http://junsele.com/viewpic.asp?id=90577

omg my eyes @--@ xD lawl its a bit too sharpened and has all these noise oging around that makes ti difficult to focus. but Behind all that noice seems to be a nice bg but im not sure, maybe try blurring the bg out and lowering thee sharpening on the render just a tad? try making it a tad less too monotone.

as for text try making it smaller so it doesnt takes attention from the focal as for the font i think that 1 is just ugly doesnt work for the mmod of the sig IMO

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Originally Posted by Firescorpio

omg my eyes @--@ xD lawl its a bit too sharpened and has all these noise oging around that makes ti difficult to focus. but Behind all that noice seems to be a nice bg but im not sure, maybe try blurring the bg out and lowering thee sharpening on the render just a tad? try making it a tad less too monotone.

as for text try making it smaller so it doesnt takes attention from the focal as for the font i think that 1 is just ugly doesnt work for the mmod of the sig IMO

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Thanks alot, thoose are all good advice, you're the man :D. I'll play around and see if i can fix some of the things you mention there. Cheers

New version based on firescorpios feedback:
http://junsele.com/viewpic.asp?id=90581

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Originally Posted by sudden85

New version based on firescorpios feedback:
http://junsele.com/viewpic.asp?id=90581

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Much better than orginal but i don't like the text, but you got plenty of time to learn :)

lower the contrast and text needs some work.

Much better on V2! Version one was wayyy to sharp. Also liek fire said trhe text was way off. You did okay with the text on V2 but it stil could use some work. Try to stick to default fonts that are liek sans serif font's and such. They tend to work with most sigs better than any font you can download.
Script font's don't often work too well and I'm afraid this is one of those times.

YOu have some awesome effects and blending going on, plus the coloring is looking good as well. I think you did an okay job with the lighting however it's very hard to tell cause the render is soo tiny.

I think you should read Dark Methods Text Guide:
CHeck it out Here

Overall this is a pretty good sig and your V2 showed marvelous improvements. Keep it up!

lol yea v2 is better

V2 looks sweet, but kind of seems empty on the left side to me, awesome work though; keep it coming :D

V2 is much better! Nice job.