c&c please...dont just say text sucks...come up with sugestions so i can improve it...worked on it for like an hour...thx... B)
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http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v5...T/vortalb5.jpg
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http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v5...T/vortalb7.jpg
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c&c please...dont just say text sucks...come up with sugestions so i can improve it...worked on it for like an hour...thx... B)
1
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v5...T/vortalb5.jpg
2
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v5...T/vortalb7.jpg
text doesnt fit in
render well blended
bg bit boring
Ok mate, the render is well blended and slightly monotoned but that don't matter. Your Background is lacking depth, what brushes did you use? The text need works i don't like them either (Font/Fx's used). I like the lines on #2 but the text is bad. Heres my Msn Add me and Pm me and i'll sort you out with effects and font man, im abit busy right now.
Benjee51@hotmail.com
Thats if you would like my help.