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Please be nice, first time trying something like this...

http://www.deviantart.com/view/16569651/

Comments? Questions? Concerns?

meh. ok but looks a li'l simple. the bg is some filters and the rest is just some matrix extrudes. not bad tho, just simple, which isnt bad! its not quite my style tho.

Yes, I didn't go for complexity I was merely experimenting. What would you do to improve it?

oh theres not much to do to improve it. its good. its your first step in this kinda thing, instead of improving it move on and try something else, just keep on making more and more until you get a lot better.

Yeah thats good advice...just move on to the next then keep moving on...good job. Ill give a 8/10

thanks guys, I hope to get better then!

lessen the brushing... it is completely hiding the render!! :(

I actually like it. I would agree with Illegalx17 and move on to the next step. I would probably give you 8.5/10 or possibly 9/10. Good work dude!
-Whitegecko-

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Originally posted by Forgotten@Mar 27 2005, 03:53 PM
Concerns?

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I'm very concerned with this one.... :lol:

I think the glow or whatever it is is too bright.