AMiBA

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/19643572/

What ya think?

Remember im learning all this :P

wow I love that, only cuz im so jealous to learn c4d, i have it but i have no links to any good tuts :(

Its ok, i think that the render is way too random though. Its also been done a million times before. Try modelling an actual object :D thats where its at. That sort of abstract is dying out and (in my opinion) for good reason. Its a bit jaggy as well. Its ok for your 3rd one, but I suggest finding (sry if i seem blunt, ive seen way too many of these O_o ) a different style than the "Create>object>modifier>open ps>random bg gradient>slap on text>done" sort of thing haha. Keep working, find some blueprints and make a real object. Thats the good 3d ;)

Thats cool, could I get permission to render it and use it in a sig?

@Jack Yes youre right, but come on...im a n00b...im learning :P gimme some time

@xPirat3x Yeah of course, you don't have to credit me, just show me your work :)

looks great! especially for just learning :) do a little brushing on ur next and itll turn out pretty nice!

i have to agree with jack tho...this style of abstract is dieing out, but it still looks pretty kick ass imo