my graphic

http://www.imghst.com/uploads/metall...us2%20copy.jpg

any feedback is highly apreciated, but keep in mind im a noob at this stuff.

seems a bit random "death is upon us" :wacko: so i dont really like it but aneways

^^^ what he said, also, very boring, and the renders dont hardly go together, to outer ones do, but not the one in the middle, whatever it be.