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The back ground is way too busy. I didnt see Ani's head for a few moments there. Tone down the grunge a lot. In fact, try not doing grunge ;) try doing your own style and leave out "renders" or anything else you find from google :D lol just a suggestion, but both ideas a good habits to get into.
edit: the edges of ani and obi are a bit blurry
im not sure how to reply to this,i wanna say the bg is too busy,but when i look at it,it doesnt look that busy,then i want to say that the picture doesnt fit in,then i look at it again,and it does.My mind is playing tricks again =/
nice title though.
jack is correct just put some more time in it
