Originally posted by Jack@Jun 26 2005, 12:26 AM
You have good ideas, but if you want my opinion on what to change, I'll give you a few things.* You need to work on your typo/font (don't worry, very very rarely does somebody know how to set up typography correctly. it just comes with time and experience).* Your cut outs are pretty good, but the glow/blur on a few of them ruins it.* The animation on them is a bit annoying (animation often doesnt go well with signatures).* For the Mob Deep one, Its good to see that you used a different background than the style the rest have.* Try to blend the two pictures together better, more like they are standing on that street there (change the color and edit the lighting a bit on them) and it will look much better.* You use colors well.* I think you should work on the backgrounds though because they often dont fit the rest of it. So the focus of the signatures seems out of place.* The best example is the last one.* That background is completely random in my opinion.* If you had like a hallway that guy was standing in and you have Sam Fisher there standing behind him, it would have a better flow. On the second one, I understand the idea of the signature (lol who doesnt...) but scanlines don't look good.* They typically dont.* And I know that the blur would look strange without them, so I just don't think that sig works very well.* Keep working though, Id like to see improvement ;)
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