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http://www.deviantart.com/view/19933861/

Ok, guys this is my first attempt at a render, in c4d so take it easy on me. but do tell me what i need to do.

Edit: Rookie Pressie.
http://img100.echo.cx/img100/8345/rookie1uq.png

Its nice fir a first. I know you said not to tell you, but I just wanna say add hyper nurbs and set everything else in it :) It will amke it lok really nice

soooo monotone, get some color in there.

agreed very monotone

Thanks for the gift :)