My First Grunge Attempt..!

I really liked grunge from the beggining but never tried... so now im trying to follow the steps of master rabieshund and jerners of course! This is my first attempt... i hope i get better... :P
http://www.eagleimg.com/up/28845.jpg

meh the bg is too plain and lacks depth, but its a start! keep tryin it. get some miss m brushes, those are awesome! pretty good. and what about me? i do rabie-esque stuff as well! :(

better then my first attempt *cries*

besides that great job...I like it

Just maybe fix your name text first time I saw it I thought it was a brush (hmm good or bad thing?)

I think it turned out ok. :) Nice job.

hahaha, little monkey lost xD, good thing that you didn't take the one without the teeth ;)

Back to the commenting:
I like the kob on the brushing, but still, I think it needs more deph, like I said at msn. I don't really like the render, lol, but it''s a start. Try some scratchbrushes, they're always the best, and try adding them on the render.

Well, the only bad thing about it is that it looks too flat, I see that now, try adding some brighter parts, and see how it turnes out. Good job, you're getting there.

thx for the comments and suggestion guys! and sorry i forgot u illegalx!
i'll make a new onwe soon and post it here... hope its better! :P

I can barely see your name in it :(

^^^^^^^ yeah maybe is that positiv :P rofl no jst jking :) nice sig :)

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