Need helpamatazz!

I desperately need any help and advice you can offer me for this sig. Thanks heaps!:)

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v6...ourneycopy.jpg

Ok first of all your text. I can barely read it, and you should consider making it smaller. Second, make your background match with your picture, don't do the mistake of matching the picture with the bg, do the opposite, sometimes matching the pic with the bg works...but u have to know when to do it...anyways, I like your blast effect, and your brushing is very nice. Nice sig overall, about a 7/10.

Thanks a lot. Is this sig any better? I know they are different styles.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v627/jackwooly/D.jpg

it looks like the blast is coming out the wrong way.. I mean with an angle or something.. dunno how to explain

Oh yeah I know what you mean. Lol.