I know it needs work, I'm just putting it here for now to get some ideas/criticism and see what I can do with this, because I think it has the potential to be pretty cool.
Um ya this one definetly needs some work. Try brushing a bg cause right now it looks like you just took some render and threw it back there and left it. The game renders really dont have a bg to be blended into so idk what to say there. The text needs work i mean i like that font you choose but plain white really doesnt go with this.
Sorry man but i hope that helps ya out some.
03-29-2005, 02:30 PM
Roy
Thanks, helps a lot. That's the actual font for the game, so it should look in place with the characters. I'll take that into consideration, welcome to the team.
03-29-2005, 08:51 PM
B][G K
the characters look sweet but it almost looks as if you just lined them up. try giving this thing some depth. i.e. make one character bigger than the others, do a closeup of one maybe. not sure, it just seems unnatural to have these warriors stading in a straight line. hope this helps.
03-29-2005, 08:53 PM
MonChoon
The text is a little choppy, might wanna do something about that.
03-29-2005, 09:16 PM
angryjohnny
Man that game gets me into trouble way to often.. i had to put it away.. you play online?.. I might make the text black with a glow behind it or make the text the same as the background with a clow behind it.. looks pretty cool tho