first in a long time

hey guys this is about my first in 4 months what do u think?

http://img341.imageshack.us/img341/2...iffcopy4bj.jpg

the rendr is nice the BG isn't great the cross hatch is nice and the text is ok

It looks good to me, i would make the render a little less faded.
make it come out more. text goes well with it.

gj, i like it..

Good job, way to come back :)