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Just made this. I'm kind of happy with the way it turned out. C&C

its alright i guess but its too dark on the bottom left. you should have something there to fill in the space. text works i guess, i'm not really sure about where its placed. and i see some green thing near the text. i think that should be taken out, or make it blue. and the left side of the rneders face looks like deformed lol. keep at it.

Deformed..thats his jaw.

Yeah it seems like it is missing something..just I can't figure out what else to add.

Text is good... maybe a bit more to the left?
Bg is nice.... detail on the render (quality) is a bit bad..
And yea the green thing.. get rid of it..
overall gj.

its pretty gud, since your looking for ideas: Iv got one mayb make him as a vamp fade in and fade out as if he's turning into a vamp don't think it wud b that hard to do...

lol, Okay. I'll see if I can do that.

lol just an idea if it don't work il kill u....just jking....just thot it wud b pretty cool and different

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Originally posted by Lumix@Jul 19 2005, 08:41 AM
Text is good... maybe a bit more to the left?
Bg is nice.... detail on the render (quality) is a bit bad..
And yea the green thing.. get rid of it..
overall gj.

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agreed