Just mucking about..

I was bored and just fooking around...CnC please.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v3...Herongreen.jpg

Daaamn, 20 views and not one comment...does it suck that much :( .

I think the background looks a little too busy, and nothing can really be made out. I think I'd like the typography if it were tweaked a little, maybe without the stroke and a smoother embossment. I'm not too keen on the whole soft light widescreen look. If this were changed slightly I think you'd have a nice sig. Good job man.

wierd...all i have to say. but it looks pretty cool, but i dont think that it should be all one color.

It looks sweet... but add more colours to it and you'll have a hot sig..

i don't like it with one colour the BG is a bit busy like the other one you did the text is good

The duplication between the left and right side is very evident, which is typically a bit repelling. Clearly the style you were going for was messy so I cannot give you as many critisisms as I could assuming you want to maintain that style (I lean towards a clean/simple style). I don't like the typography because, in my book, typography is always better when you follow the simpler route. Id take off the texture, bevel, and pick a simpler font. Then, it wouldn't quite match the rest would it? Again back to my point of how I lean towards simplicity. The border isn't extremely attractive. I see you were trying something different, but I dont think, aesthetically, this is the right choice. With so much content packed into such a small canvas size, the eyes are left to wander while one searches for the subject and/or focal point.

i think its alittle to crowded..thats my opinion.....and the color could be better