Otherwold

Not for this site but for another site. Im having a creativity block and i can't make anything. Please...help lol

http://www.gfxintervention.com/files...d_copy_236.jpg

Hmm I'm really not feeling this grey shape with 'otherworld' on it. The colour doesn't work and the embossment is far too deep/unsmoothened. Also, to me, the brushing looks a little flat, a contrast layer and some more shades of red would bring it out a bit