First 3d

http://www.deviantart.com/view/21110086/

its my first thing in C4D, i guess just tell me if oyu like it? C4 D is sooo complex for el nubzors like moi.

You need some type of anti aliasing on the edges. They're much too jagged.

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Originally posted by Death of a Clown@Jul 28 2005, 08:44 PM
You need some type of anti aliasing on the edges. They're much too jagged.

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ya lol i jsut found the antialiasing XD
txh fro comment

yea,and colorsare odd =/

The best suggestion I can give you is to try to model actual objects or scenes. Learn how to do that. If you have your heart set on abstract, then dont do the spikey-wtf-is-that-omg-its-coming-at-me-random-brushing-explosion trendwhore kinda stuff. Figure out your own style for abstract. Heres a few examples:
http://www.deviantart.com/view/14357726/
http://www.deviantart.com/view/9351913/
http://www.deviantart.com/view/8449669/
http://www.deviantart.com/view/8483242/
http://www.deviantart.com/view/9150545/

I still suggest learning to model real objects. Thats what I'm doing and modelling real objects is the best kind of 3d ;)

...its hard to be a trendwhore if you just started...I am still completely new to the program...and have virtually no idea what I am doing. I'm trying man, developing your own style comes later...after you know how to do what you want.

I wasn't calling you trendwhore by the way ;) I was referring to the render and possible future renders. Its not difficult for your first works to be trendwhore even if you just started. If your work is trendwhore, it just means that its overly mainstream. Its what everybody does and has been done a million and one times thus it lacks in creativity and originality. You don't need to start by doing trendwhore work. Just make original things as you learn. Then work to develop your style and make things using it.

So the C4D worked :) Good

And its better than my first render! haha

Very jagged, but alright for a first timer