c4d wallpapers

hope ya like it tell me what ya think its my desktop wallpapwer now

http://underoath.ilivetodie.net/pathtohellwallpaper.gif

this was my background till i made the other one

http://underoath.ilivetodie.net/abstractbackground.gif

first one i dont much like, sorry, i dont like the tech-ish stuff, idont like the text, and the render is poor quality. the second one is actually pretty good, i love the render, try to put on a bg tho. gj mate, how long have you been using c4d?

The render on the first I would have to agree is badly rendered, and it's text is very plain.

2nd one's render is really good, but thats all you have and a text. I suggest adding more to it. You should also probably look at some text tuts.

gj though as I said 2nd render is really good.

i havent had c4d that long i mess with it here and there cause it takes up so much virutal memory

but i guess no one got the idea behind the 1st render its sapose to be a path to hell but oh well

yea i got that, but the quality of the render was kinda bad, and yea try adding backgrounds or something, but for just gettin it your doin awesome man! keep it up!

i like the second one best except the type
first one is kinda random, with the tech and abstract placement and the different fonts. it doesn't flow well

btw underoath 0wNs

love the second one. The concept behind the first one is sound, but i think the path was too umm.. same colour? But the second one rocks.

I love the first one, btu make the text more techy, and less of it. With hardly any effects, amazing render in it.

Nice work, i quite like the tech. IT's subtle so it doesn't matter...

The second one is good. But it's not as catchy as the first imo , nice work on btoh. Keep it up.

The tech is too subtle in the first one, it needs more vibrancy, other than that great job, second one looks good.