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CnC?
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mm, cuz noone is replying to u i will :P
The render is streched :( and u did a Blending mode on it..,
Remove that :P
and text is VERY basic
it looks too bright for my liking and has ok typo i suppose but the bg is excllent i give it a 7/10 i m pretty generous
BG needs serious work, over contrasted i think, and too bright, and the typo is just too basic and boring, and don't distort the render, looks messed upQuote:
Originally posted by interstella hitman@Aug 20 2005, 07:24 AM
but the bg is excllent
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i say fix the whole thing, you shouldnt use bright orange bg with a war render. text also needs work, dont stretch the render.
used the tut for that one... how about it lol
these are my friends hes from a differant site and wanted some CnC on this one so i posted them for him
Font is too basic, it looks like it needs an anti alias. Pic is too streched. Im not a fan of the background.
Blend in the render.. Set AA on your text.. Take off the bar.. And try more brushing and give it more depth..
ok ill tell him all what u said.... or comment on his at PD... i think ur registered there lumix
