space

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v3.../space-v-2.gif

a lil space seen i made

kewl

yeah it's pretty cool but the text...
just use a pretty default font... like times new roman...
and another font i kinda like is Blue Highway :)

Too dark... Work on the text more.. No focal point.. Still needs more work imo..

Get rid of those scanlines. Also it needs more flow and direction.

Overall is alright, keep working.