Haunted.

First signature in about a month, excluding requests. Me and my brother Ako brainstormed several ideas and a haunted theme came up, which was my favourite, so I made this based around that. The second version has text inspired by old horror movies that were hilariously not scary, mainly 'the Crypt' and the like. Please tell me which you prefer, and try to take note of all the small details scattered around the sig.

Version One.
http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y25...t/Haunted2.jpg

Version Two.
http://img165.imageshack.us/img165/9712/haunted78wu.jpg

Also, I'm sure alot of you would like to know if any images were used, I used one character render, on the left of the sig and a picture of a haunted house. The original (below) was of very poor quality and didn't fit my ideas or into the sig resolution how I wanted it to, so I had to rebuild and redesign about 90% of it. So, it was pretty much just used for inspiration, as you can see once you look, it looks very different to the house in the sig.

Haunted House Image

Cheers for your time, and thanks in advance for the critique. Tredici.

EDIT: Based on Lumix's critique, here's a third version. Please let me know which is best.

Version Three.
http://img250.imageshack.us/img250/7361/lumixv0dw.jpg

owns as usual amazing

All I have to say is WOW. Thats amazingly good!

Excellent work man, awesome job. :D

Wow Tred.. I can't stop staring at it.. I prefer v1.. The banner is too distracting imo.. I really like how you did your name.. The only thing that's bugging me is the aura around the guy in the background.. The right side of the sig (Where the house meets with the trees) could be done better..
Maybe try removing the blue clouds above the tombstone..
But still.. Awesome work.. :lol:

Thanks for your warm response guys, and Lumix, thanks for your critique, what exactly is it that's bugging you about the 'aura', do you mean the guy in red standing by the doors? Cheers again, Tred.

all i can say is amazing !

Maybe it's just me but the lines around the aura is bugging me.. Yea it's the guy standing by the doors.. :)

Thanks alot Starcraft, and Lumix, please don't think I'm annoyed at you for mentioning it, haha, it's those kind of comments that help us to get better! I'll make another version just for you! With weaker green mist on the right side, and I'll either get rid of the lines by the guy, or change them in some way. Much appreciated lads, Tredici.

Ok Lumi, this ones based on your critique, hope it's an improvement, please let me know. Cheers, Tred.

http://img250.imageshack.us/img250/7361/lumixv0dw.jpg