http://www.deviantart.com/view/23072035/
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http://www.deviantart.com/view/23072035/
comments on da are appreciated :)
Saw this one, great job man, really looks great. The colors flow perfectly. Faved at dA.
i appreciate it alot man :D
Has no focal point and pretty flat. I like the text alot, though.
I think it looks ok, but I've kinda got to agree with Metal on this. It's not that flat though, just lack of focal point.
love the bottom left brushing...
but agree with Metal, no focal point
( Vocal Point, not Focal Point :P )
Don't get the title..
No real Vocal point, like they said, normally I'm attracted to one spot, so I looked in the middle and saw it was dark, as if it was far away, right side seems to be travelling.. So I'm left with the bottom-left wall, not bad though..
~8.12/10
Focal point....an area that draws focus. Not vocal. Vocal pertains to voice.
I don't know much about C4D so I won't comment on your techinique. Looks good though, I like the colors and the shapes work well together.