Oddworldpop out

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Flame me or fame me!

I love the focal point, my eyes are instantly drawn to the guy. I just don't think you executed in the best manner. I'm not a big fan of the scanlines w/ overlay overcontrasting the background.

The font is alright. The height is a little big. It reminds me of one of those hollogram cards. :o

Mate, that is some nice sigidge going on. I agree with ZEEK, the scanlines would be better if you just blended them in with the backgournd! Nice text going on too!! 9/10!

would look better if it wasnt a pop out, sorry just not a fan of pop outs