http://www.deviantart.com/view/23320851/
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should probably do somethin more with it.. it looks unfinished. bg is kinda plain ( i'm guilty of the same thing ) but its looks good so far
It really looks like something Mystikal would do! :P
I like it, but the background needs some more... Interest. Try a nice pattern (not scanlines or a grid/dots) and have it on a really odd perspective that fades into the light with the gradient maybe.
Use the render again, duplicate the render, and place it under the original render layer. Move it around, make it bigger, then set mode to soft light and lower opacity. Then use the eraser to delete some odd parts. Also, maybe try looking on dA for good material tutorials =)
Edit Updated with sum bubble effects I did what Myst said :)
wow, thats tight man.
Much Better.
Looks good but work on the AA on your render..
Looks great! Didn't get to see the first version so I can't compare. Really cool, I like the bubble effect and the text best xD
Thanks for the comments :) It helps me very much in this sort of new style for me