hopefully better

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v5...ixSix/popp.jpg

i didnt get anything positive towards the last, so i kept some of the suggestions in mind and made this. comments and suggestions please. any improvements.

All your renders looks so stretched :S The bg looks gd tho

I like it but yah hold shift when resizing render as i've been told many times

Yeah I agree about the image. Hold shift as you resize it and it won't do that. Also the typo could probably use some work.

Though this is still much better then your other try.

edit-lol, someone said the shift thing before me.

yeah this is much better then the last but yeah the render seems stretched again, what I usually do is go to image>imagesize and resize the whole thing there with the constrained proportions setting on. But overall nice job man. :)

ok theres like 4 people that told me to hold shift and i did. so i have no clue what you guys are talking about now.

the render looks stretched for whatever reason, which is why people are saying that.. maybe its just the actual state of the render...

the render was like 800x600 when i resized it to what it is now and i held shift. i dont think it looks stretched at all? in what way does it look stretched like visually