My Stuff

this is some of my stuff ive made in the last week
http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a1...FCdonecopy.jpg
http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a1...smudgycopy.jpg
http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a1...udgev2copy.jpg

R&C please

love the last cept for text. to dark. 1st one needs.....to be less chaotic even tho the render is chaotic the bg doesnt do it justice.
middle is kl well done

I like the last one, including the text. Maybe blend the top left of the render a lil better. Middle one is okay, I'm not too sure of your smudging, and the top one I'm not liking because the text smells, the render is blending at all, the brushings a lil odd, and the smokey bit down the bottom seems all out of place.

Hope this helps :)

not too bad, i like the middle one the best. one thing i would have to say about all of them is to add more contrast. in all the background is about the same color throughout. just add more contrast and they will be pretty darn good ;)

i dunno about the first one. there´s something about it that i dont like. cant put my finger on it tho...

second one looks sweet!

third one is good too. maybe brighten up the text a tad bit?

Work on your text, colors, and flow.