its hurr

iight i got this shit up now tell me wat u think bout this one!

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v1...s/dantesig.jpg

u need to work on the text, and the colour of the bg dont match the render. lightin also needs some work, light shpuld be coming from the left not right.

hmmm changed the text.. that any better? the rest of ur sentence i never understood bro

k, the light is on the right of the guys face (his right) so the light on the bg should be there, u need to have more reds in the bg, something that compliments the render, for the text change the font, something bold like arial black will do, make it smaller and remove the drop shadow and outer glow, then pick a colour that complimemts the sig. hope that helps ;p

lol k understand that now :) thnaks man