The background's too busy imo. I think render also needs some sort of blending in because right now, it doesn't really fit with the BG. Text also need work, white doesn't look good with that.
Your second signature looks a bit better (The BG does imo). Bit too bright at the left and right side of the signature, but I like this better than the smudge one. Text needs work as well. Keep trying :)
10-30-2005, 07:48 AM
Lumix
Don't smudge too much.. Looks like tai-pan's tut :P
10-30-2005, 07:49 AM
{-Silver-}
u smudged too much and made it look to busy. Text needs to be redone and the render looks bad. Keep trying
10-30-2005, 09:26 AM
dgentz
i agree:
too much smudging. also blend the render with the bg, there is some similarity in the colors but its still sorta meh
10-30-2005, 10:18 AM
//jimma
Nothing is really focused and the text is bland and doesnt blend in well. Overall its a good try and keep practacing ;)