any good?

two versions of this

http://img342.imageshack.us/img342/5227/kimv13yn.png

http://img342.imageshack.us/img342/3249/kimv20oz.png

your comments please =]

not liking the colouring on either it's just too weird doesn't work, v1 is better though, you need to change font

Personally, I think the background is too sharp, and the colouring just doesn't go. You could probably also work on your text some.

Keep trying :)

sorry memph i cant dig this one.. it looks well you know.. regular

Colouring is ok since the render was this colour in first place. (khimari is purple;)) The bg is too sharp and the text isnt good but overall not too bad.

Fade the filter you used on v2 a bit.. Blend it more.

You're capable of better then that.

the colours transition is too fast and random, the text ain't too hawt either