i don't really like them
the coloring is strange i don't like the shapes... also make the render more solid in the first one, cuz it doesnt'look good when you can see through it
11-11-2005, 07:16 PM
C K
http://www.greycobra.com/forums/uploads//p...-1131657026.png
Get the shit off her face. It would make it look alot better IMO. Also try to smooth out the background its way to random under the stock and just looks strange. Also the colors don't really fit. Maybe also brush an atmosphere around in there somewhere. Its kind of plan and too easy to tell what you did.
http://www.greycobra.com/forums/uploads//p...-1131670034.png
The second, one first off either find a better place/way to do the typo or just take it off altogether, because its only hurting your sig. Second the contrast looks really screwed up on the stock and the gradient in the background is again way to easy to pick out and screws up the tag. background is a bit boring but its okay...I guess.
http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y201/star...002000/keys.png
3rd. About the same as the first. Though the background is the part that really needs alot of help in this one. It looks like you have a hard mix layer or something in there where you shouldn't and its made that pixeallated area in there..which really looks ugly. Fix that. Also again brush the background some more because its to simple. Also the colors need alot of work in this one aswell.
11-11-2005, 07:56 PM
imported_starcraft
ok thanks for the advice man i will keep that in mind .. :D great C+C man
11-12-2005, 06:00 AM
sythe
not really liking any of them their BG's and renders don't go together at all