LOTR

http://www.greycobra.com/forums/uplo...1131857138.png

C+C please :)

The first thing I see is the text, and when I look somewhere, my attention is still back at the text. So I suggest you change the color of the text or make it smaller because the text is an attention grabber. The blast behind the render doesn't fit with the BG imo.
Nice try :)

I like it all but the text, so work on your text :)