Tribute Vector - WIP

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11-17-2005, 01:51 PM
Tabris

I started making this about a month ago, I haven't worked on it since as I'm too busy with school, but I'm wondering what everyone thinks so far. It's a tribute to those serving in Iraq. Bear in mind that before I made that, I'd only made one other thing to do with graphics in the three months prior.

It's already taken over 100 layers in Illustrator and it's only a crappy helmet and M4.

Some crit would be nice, I'm aware the M4 isn't perfect and it was a bitch and a half to draw. Anyway, suggestions for any additions, what to use for a background (or to leave it white) and anything else would be nice.

Quite a few people have said I should add more camo to the helmet (which I will be doing when I can be bothered to start work on this again).

Anyway:

http://img199.imageshack.us/img199/5...bvector7jk.jpg

I lame Illustrator.
11-17-2005, 11:41 PM
Lumix

I think the strap needs more detail.. And where's the clip?
Looking ok tho..
11-17-2005, 11:49 PM
Spluff

Pretty cool, you've got some good work here, now get it finished! :D.
I don't think there should be a clip if it isn't in action, 'snot how it works.
11-18-2005, 11:43 AM
Tabris

Quote:

Originally posted by Lumix@Nov 18 2005, 05:41 AM
I think the strap needs more detail..* And where's the clip?
Looking ok tho..

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It's a boot memorial to commermorate a dead comrade. It's pointless to keep the mag in a gun which won't be re-used (for the duration of the memorial at least).