ghost reveries

ok the text i have there is just so noone decides to rip, its currently a w.i.p and i need juggestions for text, anyone have any ideas???

http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y20...treveries1.gif

Try some rough/jagged text for this one.. Needs a focal point atm..

Grunged/jaged text, maybe make it white and put blending on "overlay" or "soft light" so it blends with background