-XiYa-

-XiYa-
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http://img471.imageshack.us/img471/4...es7copy8cy.gif
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What you guys think ? rates and comments plz ;)

Well, for starters, the render looks resized in the wrong way, the head is soooo wide, and it's blended too much

Text isn't too good, redo that, and those tech brushes on the sides looks just wierd O.o

I would rate it a 5/10 for the XiYa text, which looks pretty decent xD

btw, welcome to CX and it's community! I hope you enjoy your stay!

The render was actually like that, i dont got the original render i think, got it from a friend at school.. and i know its overbrushed, but its for a friend and he liked it like that hehe. and yeah.. the tech brushes hehe.. i was just playing around and tried to fill some space, and he LOVED it .. :P

thx for the welcome ;)

new update:
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http://img363.imageshack.us/img363/5...rkles104cy.gif

added some colors and fixed the stretched lady and maked the width shorter.

stock looks messed up but whatver floats your boat. coloring is a little better but still monochrom