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Nope, not liking it at all... for starters the bg looks just like a whole bunch of c4d's...,no focalpoint, render is TOO overblanded, it just wont work, and the text it horrible, stroke around text wont work either
and try using a much smaller canvas
^ He got most of it. Try a smaller canvas size. Render is too overblended, like Cynical said and the BG. The BG is too busy and messy. Might be weird for me to say this but I think the whole thing needs a bit more depth, looks flat imo. Text...change the font, it doesn't fit with this style, the color and remove the stroke.
I suggest you read more signature tutorials and keep on experimenting with different outcomes. Keep trying!
all that is needed to say is in the last 2 posts
ok I hear wear you are coming form.
