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hmm, a bit to chaotic over the render, brushing/text/etc above the render doesn't look very good, bg on the other hand looks pretty nice

text needs better placement

I agree with Synacle, a bit too bunched together.

Kindof chaotic, try to define a focal point, that will calm it down largley and make the sig kick ass.

i feel you are right with the focal point it is just a bit chaotic