First C4D render

this is my first C4D render i have done, (i got it yesterday) took me a while to figure out what i was doing, i was going to add some lighting but i didn't know how so i'll do that at another time, well what do you think?:

C4D render


could people give me some tuts to help me please

If your a beginner, get to know the matrix extrude tool, it's a godsend. Then hit your work with a hyper nurbs (looks like you've already done that).