blend your stocks better, work on typo and dont overcontrast your sigs
11-28-2005, 01:25 AM
Lumix
You need to work on your brushing.. More colour too..
11-28-2005, 01:37 AM
Spluff
Definately work on your brushing, try a few styles of brushing, instead of the same thing over and over.
Then after that, I'd work on your blending, then your text.
11-28-2005, 11:28 AM
YellowSubmarine
Ok i'll try to work on the brushing. any tips on what brushes i should download?
11-28-2005, 01:09 PM
Schwalmy
there ok, the 3rd one is to bright and the second one would be better if you didn't go from red on the left side to oranges and purples and it got to bright on the right also. And you need to blend in your renders more, it looks like all you do is make them transparent which doesn't look to good. You also need to work on your text. But keep it up man, you'll get better in no time ;)
11-28-2005, 01:37 PM
Smiling Demon
download whatever brushes u want just browes deviant art but yeh brushing needs work... i wouldnt worry about text it is damn hard!