I know its not wonderful, but some comments and suggestions for future pieces? Please, please, please -- want to know what y'all (who do brilliant work - meaning all of you) think.
This is based off the new Shakira song, Animal City, BTW.
11-29-2005, 07:25 PM
Frappy
I guess its not that good, eh? Any comments at all??
11-29-2005, 11:36 PM
Spluff
Work no your text, and make it less busy, its far too crowded and there is too much happening. Try adding a focal point :) and some lighting effects to bring that focal point in.
11-29-2005, 11:40 PM
sythe
it's too frantic and the text is crap need to be completely changed
