New siggy

Tried a few different things withthis one. CnC much appreciated! :)

http://lilshawty.250free.com/Entice.jpg

hmmm its not bad, looks a bit i dunno samey to alot of sigs i see..

if i were you i would edit >transform >flip horisontal (to tired to spell) that render.. try it, and post it..

edit- then again there would be some black blotch on the right, but w/e

needs some more depth and better direction. bg looks pretty random right now

Can't say I like a single thing about either of them.
Grainy and Grungy, I don't see how that should be applied to a female stock.

Main text in the second looks like hell, not to mention its way too large.