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It's pretty nice, give a little bit more negative space, like in the bottom rleftits almost pure colour but theres a bit of the render there which needs to go.
thats nice bit blury still looks good like the suttleness
Get rid of the stuff at the sides and the grain..
Make it focus on the material at the centre and it'll look better..
an abstract render would fit good in it to give it more depth the colors are pretty nice.. I like
