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too bright next to the meck and the fractals over the render isn't great
ya get rid of the fractals
Touch down the brightness a tad and maybe add some negative space (and depth) and it will be good.
the fracs arn't really that great, don't like the stuff over her face but the text is kinda nice
ugh.. that's probably the worst i've seen from you (no offence)..
I like your work.. but I think this one is way off..
Main thing that puts me off is the render.. Quality is weird..
BG needs more depth/colour variation..
:)
nice lighting work on the sig good job but a bit on the red side XD
BG needs more work and the colours aren't going well with the render.
